The Golden Puppy

by Madeleine
(Australia)

Girl waking up for Christmas

chapter one

Rachel woke up to no ordinary day it was the most wonderful Christmas.

She waited for her little brother Liam to wake up with her mum and dad.

When they all finally got up Rachel raced to the Christmas tree and found a big red box with her name on it she read the label it said "dear Rachel have a lovely Christmas love mum and dad".Rachel got up and gave her mum and dad a big and kiss.Then Liam said" wheres mine mum".Mrs Jane went to the Christmas tree and got out a purple rapped box and gave it to him.But Rachel paid no attention she was too busy opening her present when she opened it it had a big Dalmation and she screamed with excitement.'oh how cute I'm going to call you Goldie she said with excitement."whys that" Liam said strangely.

Look at the tail the tail was patched with gold all over.she picked the dog up and ran to her room."aren't you going to open your over presents" mum said."maybe later"Rachel said.when she got to her room she opened the doggy house that she made when she was two.Goldie played with the rainbow ball that she brought if she ended up getting a dog .She was actually going to throw it out today until she got this.and then she just realized something she forgot to say thank you.She raced down the stairs and jumped on her mum and said excitedly"thank you thank you so much I promise I will take good care of it.she raced up to bring the dog downstairs to help her open the rest of her presents.